Celebration of Life

A renga written by Karina Klesko, Johnye Strickland, Michael Baribeau, Sally Evans and Terrie Relf, October 2002 to January 2003 with three guest verses by Sprite, John Carley and Gary Blankenship.  Gary moderated construction of the renga.

The set is a modified form of a zip, a haiku form invented by John, called a jazz zip.  For more on construction, go to For a Jazz Renku.


OktoberFest     men in lederhosen
tip    cream city suds

strains of a polka    waft    across the greensward

harvest moon    the wolf pack runs

haze curtain    leafy wings
zephyrs fidget    it's my turn on stage

first snow flakes     tomatoes   still hang on the vine

Dali Christmas cards     en vogue

reflections    in a Janus eye
the icy beast   lumbers on

by felled pines   grizzly towers   trespassing rogue

crystals glimmer    in the burn

from the  penthouse     so many lights
each kiss     a portent of love

his and her mugs    steep    in their eighteen wheeler

ebb tide    shrimp boat in the bay

windy road    tires raise dust and weeds
night sky    luminescent

circle dances    for the solstice    at Stonehenge

blindfold    unattached and sure

Etna smolders    over schoolyards
devils spiral    in the fumes

out of ashes    blooms   a single white lily

spring ritual    turtles mate

hugging petals    the butterfly
drinks in a field    of colors

a bee flits   from one poem   to another

vast blue sea   your hand in mine

in the attic    chest filled
with photos     and half-finished sonnets

a corner holds   one broken ski     worn crutches

at last    inauguration

not some blot    of mustard
but a goose as large   as Tiny Tim

after a deep sleep    dreamless    reality

nursery games    patty-cake

through the maze   a gerbil
disappearing    virtual freedom

day moon    the labyrinthine path   to Mecca

swallows    return my garage

haycocks      two cut swathes
close to the poplars    long creeping shadows

storm front  weathering the news    puddle jumper

Lao-Tzu   selling dishwashers

from port to port     leaving
shell windchimes      at the Delphi ruins

Apollo launch   delayed    faulty fuel lines

the garden tilled    robins sing

kind policeman   late to our lane
please don't trample  the snowdrops

Water Goat Year   fortune blossoms   dreams brought forth

LINKS TO THE POETS:

       Sally Evans

                 Karina Klesko

                           Johnye Strickland

                 Michael Baribeau

       John Carley

                  Claire Chatele

                            Gary Blankenship
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